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Mark Armstrong's avatar

"He never sees the seven-inch army knife FLIP betwixt her scarred fingers..."

Exactly-- that's just the sort of thing you have to be alert for-- at the grocery store, or when you're restocking your birdfeeder, or just walking around, really... 😅

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Black Coffee Creative's avatar

HAHA, only be on red alert when she's nearby, dear Mark.

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Ann Marie Steele's avatar

Amazing narration...so intense!

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Black Coffee Creative's avatar

Thank youuuu, my dear ^_^.

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Nancy Santos's avatar

👏👏👏

Dark Chocolat needs to go on tour!

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Edward Swafford's avatar

She’ll just get a shitload of sequels and end up direct-to-video.

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Debdutta Pal's avatar

Now I greedily want Part 3. This was everything, my mind has been reset.

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Edward Swafford's avatar

She’ll become a franchise.

Wait for Dark Chocolat 10: Chocolat in Space.

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H. R. Sinclair's avatar

This is THE shit. A quick whip-crack to the mind with your unmatched poetic prowess.

Bravo, Ser. 👏

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Edward Swafford's avatar

House Hightower and I are indebted to you, Ser Criston.

Your words speak louder than a thousand crimson suns, setting over Dragonstone, once we reclaim our territory from Rhaenyra and her treasonous cousins.

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Neth Williams's avatar

May this inspire all dancers.

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Edward Swafford's avatar

Sans the violence/murder part, Neth. Lol.

Thank you for the read ^_^.

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Rea de Miranda's avatar

Brilliant, Edward!

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Edward Swafford's avatar

Thank you so much ^_^

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Edward Swafford's avatar

I thought you knew I have an old, South Dakota man living inside my voicebox?!

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